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Caught with the past
Chapter 2
Fionna pov: When I woke up, I took my mobile ... "7:30!" hell skollan started 8:00, I fell out of my bed and ran to the bathroom and took a shower. When I went out so dried my hair and looked myself in the mirror, all I saw was a wimpy girl who had no family, I covered my left eye with my bangs. When I was dressed and ready, I ran to the school because I missed the bus
~ At school ~
When I got to school, Angel and Liz stood outside and waited for me, Angeln saw me first, "Fionna!" she said, "I did not think you were coming today!" she said again, I sighed and smiled "Well I promised that I would come right?" I asked, "wait where is katy?" I asked, "she is home she got sick," said Liz, 'RING!' school bell rang and we went to our classes but the input we went to three different rooms said the angel "remember that the band will scratch today" and she went, right, I forgot that we were going to scratch today, I went to class and sat at the back next to Jet "hey beautiful" he whispered "hi" I replied, as he would say something a guy came in, I had not seen him here before so I assumed he was new ...
~ At Lunch ~
damn I'm late! they will not be happy! I tried to call Angel but when I press 'call' so I ran into someone "OH!" I said and fell to the floor, when I opened my eyes I saw the new guy ... He was a bit cute... wait I have a boyfriend! "sorry" I said and ran off to the music room, "I'm sorry I'm late!" I said to angel, she sighed and said "it does not matter. come on lets go!" she said happily, it made ​​me smile and forget the terrible memory.
Angels pov: "hey" said someone behind us, I and fi turned on and when I saw that it was the Devil, I was scared, "H-hey," I said, devil and I were together but he hurt me a lot, he put arm around my waist and said, "so my band will be playing at the prom next week," he said, "OH sorry but I have to go with Fi now," I said and took Fionna arm and ran away.
~ music room ~
I did my base Fionna stood in front of the mic, we all waited for Liz and Louis, "hey are you okay?" asked someone behind me, I turned around and saw Leo our drummer, "yes .." I said, he was lying and said "good" I took my cell phone and call Liz for the third time, when Liz and Louis came in through the door, "sorry we're late," they said the band leader Mel. They took their instruments and we started playing ...
mixture pov:
Angel: I'm going through the same day, same place, same way I always do.
Fionna: then I saw you from the coner of my eye. And it hit me like a ton of bricks, I can't lie.
Liz: Oh, you got  to me.
Angel and Fionna: My life was alright, living in black and white, but you changed my point of view.
Liz, fionna: show me your colors,
show me your colors,
show me your colors...
Angel and fionna: Cause without you i'm blue (without you i'm blue)....
Angel Liz and Fionna: Hurry up and save me,
Hurry up and save me,
Hurry up and save me,
Hurry up and save me.
Fionna: I just wanna feel alive and I do when I'm with you...
Angel and Liz: Hurry up and save me,
Hurry up and save me,
Hurry up and save me,
Hurry up and save me.
Fionna: I just wanna feel alive and I do when I'm with you...
Liz: show me your colors, show me your colors, (save me, save me, save me...)
finally finished,
song from: Tiffany Giardina 'hurry up and save me'

should I write a chapter about what happened Fionna?
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:iconannabelle2430:
annabelle2430 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Student Artist
whens the next one?
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LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohhee i kinda forgot about this fanfic .-. i might continue it or maybe not, i dunno yet
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annabelle2430 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Student Artist
please do its awesome! :)
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aw thanks
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annabelle2430 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student Artist
welcome a great writer deserves great appresation
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
neee my friend is a much better writer that me ^^;
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:iconannabelle2430:
annabelle2430 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Artist
So what always believe in your self no matter what all the haters have to say because their just jelly
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really?
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MarshallLeeFi Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Please continu!! I'm so curious about it!!! Please!! It's the best fionna story ever!!!! I think it's Fiolee! PLEASE GO ON! I'M BEGGGING YOU!!! *falling on kneew and bows so my head is on the floor* pleeeeeeeeeeeeasssssssss?!
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LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww how can i say no? Ok i'll continue it, plus i have nothing to do sooo :3
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dorkifiedness Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
PLEASE CONTINUE I LIKE THE STORY SO FAR
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know if i'll continue  it or not
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dorkifiedness Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why????
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i dunno really, i don't think anyone like it :p
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dorkifiedness Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You never know if you don't try

or in other words

Don't knock it until you try it
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i know

but

i'm a bat writher TT^TT 
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MarshallLeeFi Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
I'm a bad writer too
I only had one person who gave me advice and that's the only comment I ever had, but I keep continue cause there is someone who read it and you only get better when you practice. Besides if I don't write they will be stuck in my head. I will write them anyway so better upload it to here and let people read without a comic then keep it on your computer to shy to let anyone read it. Nobody will say your story is awefull or idiot here and I really love the story so please keep going on!
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LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wana continue this story
but my english is pretty bad,
I know dat feel bro.

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dorkifiedness Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you are not your excellent just please continue. If i can deal with four football games in one night in a sweaty stinky mascot suit, you can write another chapter!!
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LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
true
fine I'll try 
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IOwnYew Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
When is the 3rd gonna b out? :3 Cus I hate cliff hangerz ! :iconcannotevenplz:
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I donno
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IOwnYew Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
M'kay
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ccfirebloom Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student General Artist
MOAR! MUST GET MOAR!!!
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm writing now
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Emily20306 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Writer
I totally love this!!!!!!!!! :iconomgsocuteplz: Yep, write about Fionna's past :3 I want to know!
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ♥♥♥♥
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:iconemily20306:
Emily20306 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Writer
Welcome :3
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FionaIsMe Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Writer
YES, Masked Shadow: I gotta admit this is beast... HEY DEVIL my boss is looking for you! Mwhahaha good luck in Hell 9! (to put some info in there her boss is The Hell King which is her boyfriend Scarlet's dad)
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Angel: i hate devil TT.TT
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:iconfionaisme:
FionaIsMe Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Writer
Masked Shadow: Imma kick his ass! AND SEND HIM BACK TO WERE HE CAME FROM
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:iconiownyew:
IOwnYew Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconbrohugplz: YESH DO ONE OF WHAT HAPPENED! :icontrolllalalaplz: this is BRILL!
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:iconluckyjokerz:
LuckyJokerz Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok I write a bit now :icontrolllalalaplz:
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:iconiownyew:
IOwnYew Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:icontardplz:
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